Friday, 22 October 2010

Composition...

An appointment is waiting, impatiently,
In the hierarchy, foreshadowing
An encounter horizontally, empathy,
An engagement longtitudinally, synthesis.
Feeling the Individual in infinite ways,
Betraying the whole in infinite modal displays,
In restless determined mode invited, activated,
Into unrealised form on the thinking high way.
Accelerated thought,informed,fast flow to know,
And be known as a friend, a fortress of fortitude,
Filled with invariability, a secret unity, a surprise,
Forging knowing out of nothing, molding mood,
To a momentum, the impulse to organise,
Quickly, quickly, come and see what can be seen.
A man born again as mankind, immanently composed.

15 comments:

Sandra.if said...

I like the feeling of connection and hope...

Danielle said...

Very strong words Seán...leaving a print...

Seán McGrady said...

Two important elements you mention Sandra!! Many thanks for reading and commenting.

Seán McGrady said...

Hi Danielle...I do hope the ideas come across strongly, and if they do and remain to be thought about, that is what I hope for.

briana said...

I like the tempo of this read and the contemplation that follows! This line "Into unrealised form on the thinking high way" catches me, as I recently wrote "Traveling along retinal highways" Wonderful post Sean!!
~Bri

Seán McGrady said...

Thanks Bri...the tempo is very important, not just from the form, but an important concept/idea at the root of the work.

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Seán,

Composition is indeed a very interesting creation. A continuous journey with the evidence and the reality, or just the idea concerned with the existence of God.
The human challenge of acceptance and the turmoil that can effect itself.
Perhaps, I am blind to the message...

Eileen

MaryBeallAdler said...

Where have I been? Seán, this is a beautifully constructed metaphysical matrix. This bellows strength, hope, and insight in a very clear and interesting way. I like it. It makes me want to jump in! Well done:)

Seán McGrady said...

Mary..."jumping in" is something I would not have predicted anyone saying in response to this, but it was an essential part of the groundwork to writing this piece. Incredibly rewarding to find someone on the same plane of thought. Thankyou.

Wendilea said...

I love the jubilant urgency of this wonderment...it's contagious! Life is good!

Seán McGrady said...

Yes Wendy....that is it LIFE! & GOOD!! On the plane of immanence!!

Wendilea said...

I first wrote life is god...and I don't think that was too off the mark either!

Rita Lawn Meacham said...

A love song, inviting strength.

Short Poems said...

Enjoyed this very much Sean :)

moondustwriter said...

I know I have been to your blog before but wanted to ck it out

deep philosophical thinker / writer

like it - hope the feature comes together on One Stop